写作中⼀些空洞的单词和词组不能为句⼦带来任何有关或重要信息,这种句⼦、词、词组在写作的时候完全可以被删掉。⽐如Whenallthingsareconsidered,moreandmoreyoungadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthanthoseoftheirparents,inmyopinion.在这句话中,“Whenallthingsareconsidered”和“inmyopinion”在句⼦中都没有表达任何信息,因此会让阅卷⼈感觉考⽣有凑字数的嫌疑,这些内容完全可以去掉。改成:Moreandmoreyoungadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthanthoseoftheirparents.
2⽤简洁替换繁琐的表达
Duetothefactthatourgrandparentswereunderanobligationtohelptheirparents,theydidn’thavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehaveatthispointintime.句中的“Duetothefact”其实就是“because”的意思,“wereunderanobligation”等表达也很啰嗦,因此这个表达显得很繁琐,上⾯的句⼦可以替换为:Becauseourgrandparentswereobligatedtohelptheirparents,theydidn’thavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehavenow.
3尽量避免使⽤同样词汇
英⽂在表达的时候,如果表达的是同⼀个概念或意思,则在写作时会有意识⽤同义词、近义词等进⾏替换。这是英汉在表达中的区别之处,即英语重替换,汉语中重复,因此我们在写作的时候也要尽量不要使⽤同⼀词汇。⽐如:他的成功有⼏个⽅⾯的原因,第⼀个原因是靠⾃⾝勤奋,第⼆个原因是得到他导师的指点。Severalreasonsaccountedforhissuccess.Onewashisowndiligence.Anotherwastheguidancefromhistutor.
1二、写作高分必备5大句型1.Itis…that…强调句
Itis+要强调的部分+that+句子剩余部分例:毋庸置疑,人类活动危害了地球。
正常语序:Theearthharmedbyhumanactivitiesisanundeniablefact.强调句:ItisanundeniablefactthathumanactivitiesharmtheEarth.
2.Only开头的倒装句
“only+状语(从句)”位于句首引起的倒装句;only修饰副词、介词短语或状语从句,放在句首。
例:只有等到沙尘暴来了,人们才意识到自己犯了大错误。
正常语序:Peoplerealizedtheyhadmadeabigmistakeonlyafterthesandstormcame.
倒装句:Onlyafterthesandstormcamedidpeoplerealizetheyhadmadeabigmistake.
3.使用not…but…句型
Treattheearthwell,foritisnotgiventoyoubyyourparentsbutlenttoyoubyyourchildren.
善待地球,它不是你父母馈赠给你的,而是你的子孙借给你的。
4.Therebe句型
Thereisalargepercentageofwaterandlandpollutedaroundus.我们周围有很大比例的水源和土壤受到了污染。
5.so…that…句型
Humanbeingsaresoeconomy-orientedthattheyignoretheprotectionoftheenvironment.
人类总是以经济为导向,以至于他们忽视了环境的保护。
除此以外,还有宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语等都可用于满足句式的丰富多样。
2一、各段落句型总结写作开头:
a.Formanyyears,peopleinsistedthat......perhapsit’stimeforustohaveanewthoughton.......也许是时候对......有个全新的认识了
—对⽐过去,引出观点
b.Oncein(abook,anewspaper),Inoticedthat````hasarousedwidelypublicattention.—现象陈述,引出观点
c.Whenwediscuss````,mostpeoplethinkthat```whileothersregard```as````,asfarasIamconcerned/however,Ipersonallythinkthat```--导⼊⼤众看法,提出不同意见
d.AccordingtoThomasEdison,alegendaryinventor,“Acontentedmindisthegreatestblessingamancanenjoyinthisworld.(知⾜是⼈⽣在世最⼤的幸事)“.however,itseemstome....---通过名⼈名⾔引出主题
e.Should......./What......?Opinionsvarygreatlyamongdifferentpeople,somemaysay.......whileothersdisapprove,butinmyopinion.......--设问引出观点
中间段:
a.Inregardtothis(problem),Ithinkweshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.Foronething,........Foranother........Lastbutnoleast,........---问题解决式
b.Theymaypointoutthat.......Othersevenarguethat.......AndIwon’tdenyitsince......(说出反⽅观点的合理之处).However,frommypointofview,......(可分点陈述,但注意条理)---对⽐陈述观点式
c.Butweshouldtakeconsiderationofbothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthis(主题事物,⽐如说汽车,⽹络).Thenegativeinfluencecanbeasplainasthenoseonyourface,like.......however,wearealsoenjoyingthebenefitofit.Forinstance,.......---利弊说明式
d.Consideringalltheaspects,Icanpresentthreereasonsforthisphenomenon:firstandforemost/,......;second,......;last,......----原因陈述式
3结尾段:
a.Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove/Takingallthesefactorsintoconsiderations,wecancometotheconclusionthat......`---万能总结式
b.Allinall,itishightimethatweputanendtothis.......(根据主题)----提出建议式c.Thereisnodoubtthatspecialemphasisshouldbeputontheimprovementof(某现象,某问题).Ifwekeepignoringit,soonerorlaterwewillsuffertheconsequence.---强调主题式
d.Itishardtosaywhether.....isgoodornotsinceithighlydependsonthespecificconditions.However,frommyperspective..........-----观点表述式
四、常用句型一、开头
1.Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.2.Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.3.Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...4.Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat.。。5.There’snodenyingthefactthat.。。6.what’sfarmoreimportantisthat.。。
7.Itiscommonknowledgethathonestyisthebestpolicy.8.Itiswell-knownthat…
9.Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...10.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,...11.Withtherapiddevelopmentof...
.
二、结尾
1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...2.Inconclusion,itisimperativethat...
43.Insummary,ifwecontinuetoignoretheabove-mentionedissue,moreproblemswillcropup.
4.Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,theproblemwillbesolvedthoroughly.5.Takingalltheseintoaccount,we...
6.Whetheritisgoodornot/positiveornegative,onethingiscertain/clear.。。7.Allthingsconsidered,.。。8.Itmaybesafelysaidthat.。。
9.Therefore,inmyopinion,it’smoreadvisable.。。10.Itcanbeconcludedfromthediscussionthat.。。11.Frommypointofview,itwouldbebetterif.。。
三、表比较
1.Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.8.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.9.AandBdifferinseveralways.
10.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.
四、表原因
1.Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.
Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountphenomenon(problem).
2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.3.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat...4.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...5.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...
5for)the6.Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...
7.Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...8.Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...9.Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat.。。10.Butthefundamentalcauseisthat...
五、表结果
1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat.。。
六、表反驳
1.Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.
2.Thereisagrainoftruthinthesestatements,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact.3.Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat...4.Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...
5.Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat...6.Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat.。。
七、表证明
1.Noonecandenythefactthat...2.Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.
3.Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...4.Recentstudiesindicatethat...
5.Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...
6.Accordingtostatisticsprovedby...,itcanbeseenthat...
6五、常用谚语1、thewisemanknowsheknowsnothing,thefoolthinksheknowsall.清者自清,浊者自浊。
2、thewolfhasawinninggamewhentheshepherdsquarrel.螳螂捕蝉,黄雀在后。
3、theworldisaladderforsometogoupandotherstogodown.世界如阶梯,有人上有人下。4、theworldisbutalittleplace,afterall.海内存知己,天涯若比邻。5、thinktwicebeforeyoudo.三思而后行。
6、thingsattheworstwillmend.否极泰来。
7、timeandtidewaitfornoman.时不我待。
8、timecuresallthings.时间是医治一切创伤的良药。9、timeflies.光阴似箭。10、timeismoney.时间就是金钱。
11、timelostcannotbewonagain.时光流逝,不可复得。
12、timepastcannotbecalledbackagain.时间不能倒流。13、timetriesall.
路遥知马力,日久见人心。14、titfortatisfairplay.
人不犯我,我不犯人;人若犯我,我必犯人。
715、toerrishuman.人非圣贤,孰能无过
16、talkofthedevilandhewillappear.说曹操,曹操就到。17、talltreescatchmuchwind.树大招风。
18、teachothersbyyourexample.躬亲示范。
19、thebestheartsarealwaysthebravest.无私者无畏。
20、thebestmanstumbles.伟人也有犯错时。
21、thecatshutsitseyeswhenstealing.掩耳盗铃。
22、thedangerpastandgodforgotten.过河拆桥。
23、thedarkesthourisnearestthedawn.黎明前的黑暗。
24、thedarkestplaceisunderthecandlestick.烛台底下最暗。
25、thedevilknowsmanythingsbecauseheisold.老马识途。
26、thedevilsometimesspeaksthetruth.魔鬼有时也会说真话。27、thedieiscast.木已成舟。
28、theearlybirdcatchestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。29、theendjustifiesthemeans.
8只要目的正当,可以不择手段。30、theendmakesallequal.死亡面前,人人平等。
31、theeyeisbiggerthanthebelly.贪多嚼不烂。
32、thefarthestwayaboutisthenearestwayhome.抄近路反而绕远路。
33、thefinestdiamondmustbecut.玉不琢,不成器。
34、thefireisthetestofgold,adversityofstrongman.烈火验真金,艰难磨意志。35、thefirststepistheonlydifficulty.迈出第一步是最艰难的。
36、thefoxknewtoomuch,that'showhelosthistail.机关算尽太聪明,反误了卿卿性命。37、thefoxpreysfarthestfromhome.兔子不吃窝边草。
38、thefroginthewellknowsnothingofthegreatocean.坐井观天。
39、thegrassisgreenerontheotherside.这山望着那山高。
40、thegreatesttalkersarealwaysleastdoers.语言的巨人总是行动的矮子。41、thehigherup,thegreaterthefall.爬得高,摔得惨。
42、theleopardcannotchangeitsspots.本性难移。
43、themorenoble,themorehumble.人越高尚,越谦虚。
944、pleasurecomesthroughtoil.苦尽甘来。
45、pourwaterintoasieve.竹篮子打水一场空。46、practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。
47、praiseisnotpudding.恭维话不能当饭吃。
48、praisemakesgoodmenbetter,andbadmenworse.好人越夸越好,坏人越夸越糟。49、preferlosstounjustgain.宁可吃亏,不贪便宜。50、preventionisbetterthancure.预防胜于治疗。
51、pridegoesbefore,andshamecomesafter.骄傲使人落后。52、promiseisdebt.一诺千金。
53、proverbsarethedaughtersofdailyexperience.谚语是日常经验的结晶。54、pullthechestnutoutoffire.火中取栗。
55、putthecartbeforethehorse.本末倒置。
56、putyourshouldertothewheel.鼎力相助。
57、readingenrichesthemind.开卷有益。
58、readingistothemindwhileexercisetothebody.
10读书健脑,运动强身。
59、respectyourself,ornooneelsewillrespectyou.要人尊敬,必须自重。60、romeisnotbuiltinaday.冰冻三尺,非一日之寒。
61、sayingisonethinganddoinganother.言行不一。
62、seeingisbelieving.眼见为实。
63、seekthetruthfromfacts.实事求是。
、sendawisemanonanerrand,andsaynothingtohim.智者当差,不用交代。65、setathieftocatchathief.以贼捉贼。
66、shortaccountsmakelongfriends.好朋友勤算账。
67、somethingisbetterthannothing.聊胜于无。
68、soonlearn,soonforgotten.学得快,忘得快。69、soonripe,soonrotten.熟得快,烂得快。
70、speechissilver,silenceisgold.能言是银,沉默是金。71、stillwaterrundeep.静水常深。
72、striketheironwhileitishot.趁热打铁。
1173、successbelongstothepersevering.坚持就是胜利。
74、takethingsastheycome.既来之,则安之。75、talkingmendsnoholes.空谈无补。
76、nothingistobegotwithoutpainsbutpoverty.世上唯有贫穷可以不劳而获。77、nottoadvanceistogoback.不进则退。
78、nottoknowwhathappenedbeforeonewasbornisalwaystobeachild.不懂世故,幼稚可笑。
79、nowayisimpossibletocourage.勇者无惧。
80、obedienceisthefirstdutyofasoldier.军人以服从命令为天职。81、observationisthebestteacher.观察是最好的老师。82、offenseisthebestdefense.进攻是最好的防御。
83、oldfriendsandoldwinesarebest.陈酒味醇,老友情深。84、oldsinmakesnewshame.一失足成千古恨。
85、onceamanandtwiceachild.一次老,两次小。
86、onceathief,alwaysathief.偷盗一次,做贼一世。87、oncebitten,twiceshy.
12一朝被蛇咬,十年怕井绳。
88、oneboyisaboy,twoboyshalfaboy,threeboysnoboy.一个和尚挑水喝,两个和尚抬水喝,三个和尚没水喝。、onecannotputbacktheclock.时钟不能倒转。
90、oneeyewitnessisbetterthantenhearsays.百闻不如一见。
91、一着不慎,满盘皆输。onegoodturndeservesanother.92、行善积德。
onehourtodayisworthtwotomorrow.93、争分夺秒效率高。
oneman‘sfaultisotherman‘slesson.94、前车之鉴。
oneneverlosesanythingbypoliteness.95、讲礼貌不吃亏。
oneswallowdoesnotmakeasummer.96、一燕不成夏。
one‘swordsreflectone‘sthinking.97、言为心声。outofdebt,outofdanger.98、无债一身轻。outofoffice,outofdanger.99、无官一身轻。outofsight,outofmind.100、眼不见,心为静。
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